dostali jsme za úkol napsat sloh v rozsahu 120-150 slov na téma Who do I trust the most. Nejsem si v angličtině úplně jistá a byla bych moc ráda, kdybyste mě upozornili na chyby co najdete.
I think I trust most my mother. She knows my dreams, my hobbies and she knows how to help me with my problems. First reason why I trust her is that she is my mother of course. She takes care of me and she wants me to have a happy life. Second reason is that I tell her everything what is happening at school, I tell her everything about my friends, I tell her just about everything, so she knows my feelings and she can help me to solve my problems. An example why I trust her is from my first day at school. I was frightened and I did not want to go there, but she told me that it will be OK, that I will meet new friends and she was right.
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zdravím... opravila bych pouze: I trust my mother most. (most na konec). Jinak všecko OK, až na tu poslední větu, tam musí být doržena souslednost časů, čili: she told me that it would be ok, that I would meet... Jinak super, a je pěkné, že píšete o mámě, určitě by jí to potěšilodoplněno 06.02.14 20:17:
omlouvám se, chybička se vloudila - I trust my mother THE most.
Já bych ještě opravila ...what is happening... na ...what happens...