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Hobbit: The Desolation of Smaug
The film tells story of hobbit Bilbo Baggins on his common bond with the wizard Gandalf the Grey and thirteen dwarves led by Thorin Oakenshield. It is set in magical world. This film was based on the adventure book The Hobbit, or There and Back Again and is directed by Peter Jackson who also made films King Kong, Lovely Bones or a series of Lord of the Rings. Martin Freeman plays the starring role as hobbit the Burglar. The others film stars are Ian McKellen, Benedict Cumberbatch, Luke Evans, Orlando Bloom etc. It’s Adventure/ Fantasy film.
It’s a story of a hobbit called Bilbo Baggins. He has peaceful life in village called Kraj. The story begins when Gandalf visits hobbit and offer him adventurous journey. But the hobbit is too lazy and likes the warmth of his home. Last he decides to go on this journey and adds to Gandalf and dwarves. After successfully crossing over the Misty Mountains, dwarf Thorin and Company must seek aid from a powerful stranger before taking on the dangers of Mirkwood Forest. In the end they musts get into Lonely Mountain through secret door and defeat the dragon Smaug. He experiences a lot of venture and danger and changes his worldview.
It was rather unbelievable. The cast is excellent. It’s bound to be a box office hit. I liked the film for a number of reasons. I admire the author for great processing. It’s also good film for someone, who likes fantasy and adventure. I thoroughly recommend to watch it, don’t miss it!
kurnííík, já už dávno neumim anglicky, proč na to sakra už dávno někdo neodpověděl?!?!?
takže tohle bude jen namátková a nezaručená kontrola:
radši dopředu vzdávám použití členů...
on his common bond with =? (jako ve vzájemném svazku?), nebylo by lepší (neřikám správný) on his journey with
It is set in magical world. - of course we are in fully magic, fairy world
It’s a story of a hobbit called Bilbo Baggins.(to už se řeklo na zač. 1. odstavce) He has peaceful life in village... - lépe Bilbo enjoyed his peaceful life in little village...
Gandalf visits hobbit and offershim to take a part in anadventurous journey
is too lazy and likes the warmth(asi radši the comfort) of his home
Last he decides to go on this journey and adds to Gandalf and dwarves - But he decides to go in the end and joins Gandalf with other dwarfs (že je možnej tvar dwarves jsem teda netušil - je možnej, ale mě dráždí, já ho psát nebudu...)
must seek aid from a powerful stranger before taking on the dangers of Mirkwood Forest - asi líp: must ask powerful stranger for a help before facing the the dangers of...
In the end they must(bez toho s)
...the dragon Smaug. He experiences a lot of venture and danger and changes his worldview - During his journey Bilbo overcomes many dangers, he changes his mind and becames quite different person