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My best school experience

I was seven years old and I used to go to primary school when I went with my schoolmates and my teacher on school trip to Rokštejn castle. It was my first school trip ever.

The day before the trip our moms prepared us very big packet of food and we could go away next day early morning.

All children enjoyed the bus journey, because our teacher was telling us about White woman, who scare tourists at night in castle. At first we had fear, but we didn’t believe him.

Bus arrived to small village near of Rokštejn. It was before the lunch and all children were hungry. Our teacher made a fire. Of course each of us brought for itself some sausage and we baked it on fire. The trip was difficult but we were full of energy after lunch and we wanted to go to castle very much. Rokštej was on the top of hill and I will never forget the view from this castle.

We stayed there over night. Our teacher made a fire again and played the guitar. We were singing and enjoyed the night. All my friends were sleeping but I couldn’t sleep, because I remembered for story about White woman. After few minutes I heard some noise other children woke up. The panic started. I was finding the teacher with my friend, but he was away. We were scared. We saw something white and we were tried to escape but it was too late White woman caught us but she spoke with male voice and we knew that she was our teacher. Everyone was laugh and one boy take off teacher´s white coat. Teacher apologised us and I could sleep.