Prosím jestli by mi někdo jen mrkl a opravil popř.chyby 
Je to na téma sport.
Díky
Today is many children,who sit all day at the computer or TV and they don’t do any sport or they donť know about sports.Why?Why not try something new sport?Something . that you put as a goal - to succeed and put your energy into it. You still have the feeling that you will mastered all of this?
So that I would like to introduce figure _skating. Figure skating is for individuals, couples and skupiny. Myself I can say that it really is an amazing sport. If you are a begginer and never have not stood on skates. So the time has come! J Usually takes a few months before you get into it and and then just learn a few elements.The beginnings a figure skating,you just have a good skates and protectors if you are not sure. You will learn the elements from the "tree" and "slow dances" Then you can expect the top elements,Which are the trojitý axel, toulup etc.
It takes a lot of effort and patience,All not so fast as to seem. But would not it be great to hear
How people talking about you? Therefore, if you feel that you could try it and give a little chance to figure-skating.So take your skates, courage, friends, and go for it!GOOD LUCK!
Ještě to zkusím zítra...
Omlouvám se že píšu až ted
V dnešní době je mnoho dětí,které sedí celý den u počítače či televize a nedělají žádný sport nebo neví ani o tom,že nějaké sporty jsou.Proč?Proč si nezkusti něco nového,něco co byste si dali jako cíl uspět a dát do toho energii?Proč si nezkusit krasobruslení?Je pro jednotlivce,páry i skupiny.Je to opravdu velmi úžasný sport.Pokud jste začátečník a nikdy jste nestáli na brsulík tak je nejvyšší čas začít!Zpravidla trvá pár měsíců než se do toho dostanete a pak už se jen učit pár prvků.K začátkům krasobruslení stačí jen dobré brusle a i chrániče,pokud si nejste jisti.Pakale můžete očekávatšpičkovéprvky,které jsouaxeltrojitý,toulupatd.To vyžaduje hodněúsilíatrpělivosti,všenení takrychle, jaksezdá.Ale nebylo by tobylo skvěléslyšet
Jak lidéo vás mluví?Proto,pokudmáte pocit, žebyste mohlizkusitadátmalou šancipřijít bruslení.Tak vemte sibrusle, odvahu,přátele,jděte na to!Hodně štěstí
Díky
Today there are many choldren who sit all the day at the TV or PC and don't do any sports or even don't know about sports. Why? Why now try something new, something that you can set as you're goal and put your energy into it?
Why not try figure skating? It's for individuals, couples and groups. It's really a great sport! Even if you're a beginner and have never stood on skates, it's the right time to begin! You need only skates and maybe some protectors. Usually it takes a couple of months until you get into it and then you start to learn some basic elements such as "three turn", "slow dances" etc. But than you can expect the top elements such as "toe loop", "triple jump" etc. That requires lots of effort and patience. Its not as quick as it seems. But wouldn't it be nice to hear people talking about you? So if you feel you could try it, get your skates and friends and go! Good luck!
Both English and Czech versions of your text are horrible and almost unreadable. You even don't know the right names for the figures, so I had to guess what is what and could have made some errors. And as this is probably your homework or something similar and I don't want you to just copy my text, but to do some work yourself, I purposedly made three errors and you have to find them and correct them.
doplněno 14.03.13 20:44:I'm sorry, "choldren" is a mistake. "Three turn" is how it's called in the glossary I put here a link to. Search again.
doplněno 14.03.13 21:02:I'll help you: One apostrophe where it's not needed, one "a" instead of "e" and one missing apostrophe.
doplněno 14.03.13 21:16:OK.
you're -> your
than -> then
its -> it's
No problem with "it's not", it's a common phrase .-)
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