AJ - oprava dopisu

Dobrý den,
chtěla bych Vás poprosit o opravu tohoto textu, jedná se o školní úkol - dopis mému oblíbenému zpěvákovi, zpěvačce, kapele.

For Simple Plan:
Dear Chuck, David, Pierre, Sebastien and Jeff.

My name Elizabeth, I am 16 years old and I live in Czech Republic. I love Simple Plan so long that I do not know when it started. First time, I would like to say thank you for your music. If I may, let me tell you such a short story about one of your songs, too. Every time a quarrel with my best friend, we reconciles during your song Astronaut. Sometimes, when she is sad and she is feeling lonely, i call her Astronaut. And she know, that I am her for her. That we are two for every problems.

Second time, I would like to say thank you for your concert in Prague in September. It was totally great, althought from the beginning it seemed wrong. On the highway was a smash. Then we could not find some place to park there. We were late and I was sad, because I thought that we will be far from a stage. But then we met you, Pierre, and you, Sebastien, walking along exhibition grounds. I asked them if we could take a picture with them. You were really nice. We were talking a little bit together and you, Pierre, learnt my father how to work with a camera on mobile phone, because my dad by mistake take a picture of himself. So I would like to ask you for your autograph in this way. I send you some photos, and I would be really very happy, if you can these photos sign for me. I know that there is one photo three times - one for me and the other for my best friends Tereza and Gabriela. I would be really like, if you can fulfill my wish.

Thank you for your willingness and I wish you many other success. I\\d like to thank you so much for your time that you spend for reading this letter. I am looking forward to your next concert in the Czech Republic.

Yours Sincerely,
Elizabeth

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