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line-height:115%">Ostrava, 17. 9. 2011
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line-height:115%">Dear Mrs. teacher,
line-height:115%">my name is Adam, I am fifteen. I have got one brother Steve. He is thirteen years old and he likes music, playing on the guitar and drawing.
line-height:115%">My parent´s names are Vanda and Zdeněk. My father is fifty-two years old and he is a manager of small company. My mother is 46 years old and she is a secretary.
line-height:115%">I have got two aunt and one uncle. Auntie Jana is my dad´s sister. She is forty-four years old. My second auntie is Svetlana. She lives and works in USA. My uncel Robert is computer expert. He is husband of aunt Svetlana. They have got two children - one son, Robert and one daughter - Amy. They live in Alabama in USA.
line-height:115%">My hobies are taking photo, playing on guitar, drawing and painting. I like sports, for example cycling.
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line-height:115%">Yours Sincerely
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