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The book tells story of jealous, love and spite. The book tells story of Othello, Desdemona, Iago and next more…
Othello was a highly esteemed general in the service of Venice. Iago was Othellos ambitious friend. Othello promoted the Michael Cassio to the position of personal lieutenant and Iago was deadly jealous. Iago began an evil and malicious campaign against the hero. Othello married Desdemona. But anyone knew it. Iago became artful and he made a plan, how ruin Othello’s happiness. His plan was successful and Othello became jealous and suspicious od Desdemona. At last, Othello killed his his innocent wife. Emilia told Othello the truth about the scheming Iago. Othello wounded Iago, then killed himself. Iago killed Emilia.
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Tady je muj nazor na to, jake tam jsou chyby. Ber to s rezervou :

• ...one of the great tragedy plays by ... (nejsem si uplne jisty, co mam ma vlastne byt )
  
• tells A story of jealousY, ...
  
• tells THE story ... and a few more (co ma znamenat "next more" - priste vice?)
  
• co je esteemed?
  
• Othellos ambitious friend
  
• promoted Michael ...
  
• Iago became deadly jealous
  
• But everyone knew it. (tady ti asi vypadlo, ze se s ni ozenil potaji, protoze jinak ta veta nedava smysl).
  
• co ma znamenat artful? (mistrny? mistrovsky?)
  
• made a plan how to ruin
  
• suspicious of Desdemona
  
• In the end Othello ... (At last = konecne)
  
• about scheming Iago
  

Othellos ambitious friend (nezobrazil se ten apostrof za Othello).