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Od: diva* odpovědí: 1 změna:
Dobrý den,moc bych vás chtěla poprosit o opravu textů(articly,různé předložky apd.);a o jeden překlad jednoho textu,protože já tomu textu vůbec nerozumím.Děkuji předem ochotnám lidem:)
1.kontrola
-Twilight is a series of four vampire-themed fantasy romance novels by American author Stephenie Meyer.
-It charts a period in the life of Isabella "Bella" Swan, a teenage girl who moves to Forks, Washington, and falls in love with a 104-year-old vampire named Edward Cullen.
-Edward saves Bella in only circumstances from certain death under the wheels of delivery, and Bella begins to suspect that Edward is no ordinary mortal.
- After a short time longer fails to prevent the mutual attraction and passionately in love.
-It turns out that Edward is a vampire that feeds on blood of animals and only Bellas blood it undergoes a severe test.
2.kontrola
-My best friends are Misa and Terka.
-I know them since the first class of primary school.
-We spent together enormous amount of good and bad moments.
-We have nearly the same hobbies and sometimes the same opinions.
- Together, we can entertain a large number of our friends.
- We have common friends, interests, hobbies, listening to the same style of music ...
-We both like travelling, reading, swimming, talking about politics, computers,fashion..
-They are is never tired of listening to me.
-We often spend our leisure time together.
-They are quite frank, helpful, generous, clever and sometimes even wise, although to some people he may seem selfish, lazy, moody and careless.
-It is a pity that we are not together as often because we are each on a different school.
-I love them and never forget them.
-They are friends for life.
*Překlad
-My history teacher of last year had a great appreciation for what she taught us, and it was clear.
-Lessons were engaging, because she actively tried to impart her appreciation for history.
-The worst kind of teacher is intimidating and impatient.
-I acknowledge occasional impatience as a flaw present in even the best of us, but a snappish, exasperated attitude is one of the easiest ways for a teacher to lose a student forever.
-I once had a brilliant teacher who taught an upper level course.
-As she constantly reminded us, we as students were expected to take initiative in studying and preparing for tests.
-She explained that the class would proceed at a rapid pace, but I was unprepared for her unwillingness to help students.
-The maddening impatience she had for taking questions made even the brightest students feel stupid.
-When students don’t even feel comfortable asking for help, it hinders the learning process and stifles the learning environment.

 

 

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1.kontrola
-Twilight is a series of four vampire-themed fantasy romance novels by an American author, Stephenie Meyer.
-It charts a period in the life of Isabella "Bella" Swan, a teenage girl who moves to Forks, Washington, and falls in love with a 104-year-old vampire named Edward Cullen.
-Edward saves Bella in only under dangerous (ale není moc jasné, co tím chceš říct, tak nevím) circumstances from certain death under the wheels of a delivery, and Bella begins to suspect that Edward is no ordinary mortal.
- After a short time longer? (podmět) fails to prevent (doplň sloveso "bojovat proti") the mutual attraction and passionately? (chybí sloveso, dohledej si "zamilovat se") in love.
-It turns out that Edward is a vampire that feeds on blood of animals and only Bellas blood it undergoes a severe test.

Vypadá to na google translator, ale docela slušně upravený překlad.
2.kontrola
-My best friends are Misa and Terka. -OK.
-I know them since the first class of primary school. - Spojka "since" evokuje použití předpřítomného času, oprav si to ve slovese.
-We spent together enormous amount of good and bad moments. -Pokud v minulosti, opět bude předpřítomný čas. Jinak přítomný obyčejný, tedy základní tvar od "spent" (to je minulost nebo pp).
-We have nearly the same hobbies and sometimes the same opinions. -OK.
- Together, we can entertain a large number of our friends. -OK.
- We have common friends, interests, hobbies, listeningwe listen to the same style of music ...
-We both like travelling, reading, swimming, talking about politics, computers,fashion.. -OK.
-They are is (tak které z nich? je to plurál) never? (tady chybí sponové sloveso ve funkci "dostat se do stavu", tj. zde "unavit se") tired of listening to me.
-We often spend our leisure time together. -OK.
-They are quite frank, helpful, generous, clever and sometimes even wise, although to some people he? (podmět musí být stejný) may seem selfish, lazy, moody and careless.
-It is a pity that we are not together as often because we go to different schools.
-I love them and never forget them.
-They are friends for life.

1)? = něco ti tam chybí.

2) Jelikož jsi vyrobila tyto věty výše, nemůžeš alespoň z části nerozumět větám, které žádáš na překlad. Vlož sem svůj vlastní překlad a společně ho opravíme.

doplněno 04.12.10 22:32:

Všude před těmi mnou doplněnými otazníky mají být mezery. Asi jsou automaticky umazavány a brány jako textová chyba (což taky je), já používala otazník jako samostatný znak, ale to samozřejmě program nepozná, tedy se omlouvám za menší přehlednost.

 

 


 

 

 

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