Mám text správně napsaný? Neudělala jsem tam chybu? Prosím, pokud něco najdete budu ráda za upozornění a zda dává smysl. Děkuji.
My daily rutine regulary start at 5:30am. When I wake up I start with my hygiene in bathroom. After that I start to prepare breakfast and snack for David. Then David goes to work. When he leave I go to let my dog Mikeš go to garden beacuse he need to do what he needs. After that all I slowly making breakfast for my girls Tina and Bara. I change water and give new food for Mikeš. When girls wake they put on some clothes and go to kitchen where we eat together at one table. I make some coffee and play my favorite songs. While breakfast end I ventilate all the rooms. Meanwhile we make a bed for oneself. Daughters are gona making homework and I go to cook lunch. I make up for bread I wash the laundry. In 12:30 pm. we eat together. If we eat all the food I can check girls homework if they do it correctly. I throw myself into everyday household chores. In case of good weather we go outside on garden. We bet herbs and flowers. In 4:00 pm. I make snack and wait for David. When David finally arrive home from job we have some coffee together and I prepare the snack again, but this time to him. Then we are talking what happend during the day. In 7:30 pm. girls get dinner. Until they all eat they go to shower and get ready to bed. I every evening listening meditation music that tunes me and falls asleep better. I go to sleep around 8-9:00ypm
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My daily rutine regularly starts at 5:30am. When I wake up I start with my hygiene in bathroom. After that I prepare breakfast and snack for David. Then David goes to work. When he leaves I go to let my dog Mikeš go to garden, beacuse he needs to do, what he needs. After all of that I slowly make breakfast for my girls Tina and Bara. I change water and give new food for Mikeš. When girls wake up, they put on some clothes and go to kitchen, where we eat together at one table. I make some coffee and play my favorite songs. While breakfast end, I ventilate all the rooms. Meanwhile, we make our bed. Daughters are going to do homework and I´m going to cook lunch. I make up for bread and wash the laundry. At 12:30 pm we eat together. When we have eaten all the food, I can check girls homeworks, if they did it correctly. Then i throw myself into everyday housework. If the weather is good, we go outside to the garden. We bet herbs and flowers. At 4:00 pm I make snack and wait for David. When David finally arrives home from job, we drink some coffee together and I prepare the snack again, but this time to him. Then we are talking, what happend during the day. At 7:30 pm girls eat dinner. When they have eaten all of it, they go to shower and get ready to bed. I´m listening every evening meditation music, that tunes me and I fall asleep better. I go to sleep around 8-9:00 pm.
When he leaves I let my dog Mikeš go to the garden because he needs to do what he needs to do.
(Zdalo se mi to az zbytecne slozite napsane a za tim druhym needs musi byt CO. A nebudou tam take carky.)
I give Mikeš fresh food and water.
(nelze napsat "give smth for smd")
When THE girls wake up (uz je zminujete podruhe)
"While breakfast end" je nesmysl, napsala bych When breakfast ends, I...
The daughters do their homework and I cook lunch. After we eat all of the food...
...I check the girls homework for any mistakes. ( je to kratsi a hlavne homework je nepocitatelne, nemuze mit na konci S)
...but this time FOR him. Then we talk about what has happened during the day. At 7:30pm THE girls eat their dinner.
...they go to THE shower.
...get ready FOR bed.
Every evening I listen TO meditation music that tunes me and helps me fall asleep better. (nejsem si tu jista pouzitim slovesa tune. Co jste chtela rict?)
Mozna je tam toho vic, omlouvam se za pripadne chyby.
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