Kontrola úkolu aj

Od: Datum: 27.11.14 17:38 odpovědí: 2 změna: 27.11.14 21:45

Na pondělí máme úkol z angličtiny a byla bych vděčná kdyby jste mi překontrolovaly jestli tam nemám nějaké hrubky:) děkuju předem.

I and my friend were in forest, but anybody wasnt there. I asked her, do you see anything? She said " yes a in distance I see something. So we ran to it.There was small house. We went into the house. In corner of room somebody was sitting. He turned at us. He was ugly and scary. We ran outside ,but forest was away and we can hide nowhere. But he was still behind us we ran fast away, but we didnt know where we are. I shouted "help, help". But nobody heard me. I wished to be anywhere else. Sudenly I appeared in my bed, but around me was nothing. I was somewhere, where it was really similar like near me in room. At once i heard a tremendous blow. I woke up and everything was ok.


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Datum: 27.11.14 20:51
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I and my friend were in the forest, but there was not anybody/was nobody there. I asked her, do you see anything? She said " yes I see something in the distance. So we ran to it.There was a small house. We went into the house. Somebody was sitting in the corner of the room. He turned at us. He was ugly and scary. We ran outside ,but the forest was away and we could not hide anywhere. But he was still behind us so we ran fast away, but we didnt know where we were. I shouted "help, help". But nobody heard me. I wished to be somewhere else. Suddenly I appeared in my bed, but around me was nothing. I was somewhere where it was really similar like near my room. Then I heard a tremendous blow. I woke up and everything was OK.
I corrected not only errors but also some sentences that are actually correct but teachers dont like them. Now I dont have time to do more, will do it tomorrow if you want ;)

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Datum: 27.11.14 21:45
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Já bych ještě opravila- Me and my friend...but nobody was there. He turned on us.

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