Anglický příběh

Ahoj Chtěla bych vás moc poprosit a to jestli by jste po mě nezkontrolovali příběh ,který jsem napsala v angličtině. Jelikož v angličtině nemám moc dobré známky ,tak mi na tom hodně záleží Mají tam být všechny tři časy ,ale nemám tam přítomný a předminulý. Jak by jste to změnili? Děkujumoc!
Yesterday a famous singer said that he will go to the ice skating rink. He had fear because he skated very long ago. He Still wondering about that one. Finally, he said "I gone there!" He took his skates and went.
When he walked into the stadium he saw two small boys with mom on skates. He put on his skates and started riding. He skated and so began making stupidity. He rode and skip around until he fell to the ground. He woke up in the hospital with upheaval brain. Today she came to him mom of two boys of the stadion and she gave him chocolate. He thanked and over time have been good friends.