Dobrý den, mohl by se mi prosím někdo podívat na tuto esej, zda v ní nemám chyby? Byla by jsem moc vděčná. (+ nevíte nějaký zůsob jak se v třetím odstavci vyvaruji opakování slovesa "read"?)
Předem moc děkuji,
In my free time I don’t do that much. I usually relax or go out with my friends to the cinema or just shopping. Sometimes I try to play on my piano, but I’m not really good at that. I also like to draw little doodles and sketches.
But my biggest hobby is learning English. I really love it. I usually spend about two hours a day watching films in English (usually without subtitles) or watching Youtubers such as Marcus Butler, Tyler Oakley or Dan Howell. They always make me smile.
Recently I bought a lot of books in English. Last summer I’ve read The Fault in Our Stars by the one and only John Green in just 4 day. He is my favourite author of all time. I’m about to read the Abundance of Katherines soon. Currently I have 14 books in English and I’ve already read 6 of them. At the moment I’m reading The Hobbit. I’ve always wanted to read it but I’ve never actually got to it, so why not now.
I also found a friend on the internet who’s from the UK. Her name is Sam Renshaw and she lives in Lincolnshire, which is a small town near Leeds. She’s just 2 years older than me. We often talk about our favourite TV shows. We practically have the same opinions about the plot of these shows and also we like the same characters in them.
Dobry den, vyvarujte se skladani slov dont piste do not. Im not jako I am not. Toto je v esejich velka chyba. To same s cislovkami 14 books jako fourteen books.
pouzila bych v prvni vete In my spare time... to see a movie
play piano ( nepiste ze nejste dobra, toto je anglictina, nepodcenovat se vlastnimi slovy. Nahradte to treba ze jste zacatecnik)
Favourite hobby, i like studying English very much. Usually I spend ...movies in English without subtitles... zavorek se take snazte vyvarovat v esejich.
they make me laugh...
Recently I bought several books...
Right now I am reading...
And why are short forms bad? They are counted as two words anyway (at least in my school).
Numbers also aren’t a problem if she doesn’t mind having them NOT counted (that can actually be useful if you’re runninf out of space).
I usually GO shopping, Play THE piano, good at THIS, like DRAWING, místo films bych dala movies, ale to není chyba, of all THE time.
tFioS... right in the feels