Mám někde chybu?

Od: Datum: 18.03.14 23:00 odpovědí: 1 změna: 19.03.14 04:36

Ahoj, jen se chci zeptat, jestli mám někde nějaké chyby, určitě jo, ale nevím kde, díky za radu ;)

Dear Mr. X

I want to tell you about our environment in Czech Republic, where I live.

I think, the today’s environment is much better than during the the period of socialism, when the water and the air were in very bad condition because of the harmful substances formed through combustion of coal and because of the absence of water purifiers .

Now the water is cleaner, but the air pollution is worse. It remains a problem of industrial pollution in North Moravia and the amount of harmful emission of the traffic on the roads is going to be serious.

The other things, that threaten our environment are pesticides and industrial fertilizers. It pollutes poil and water. The extraction of minerals is problem too, because it destroys the landscape.

There is many things we can do for the good of the nature . People should to separate the waste, exploit the public transport , exploit the renewable resource, reuse the largest possible amount of material, save water and electricity and other simple things we can change.

I think, when the people won‘t stop being greedy, messy and reckless, every city will be under the dome like in The Simpsons movie and people will fight for the little place under it.

I hope we become wise and return to live in harmony with the nature.

Thank you for reading.


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Datum: 19.03.14 04:36
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I would like to tell you...

Druha veta: prilis mnoho "the"

Ctvrta veta: Other things that... nebo ...Amongst other things...fertilizers polluting soil and water.

...is a problem...

There are many things

People should separate...take advantage of public transportation...use renewable sources

If people were not so greedy, messy and reckless, every city would be... would fight...

...return to living in harmony...

Ohodnoceno: 2x
 

 

 

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