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The town where I live

My native place is the town called (virtual town). I spend here lots of time and I really like it. So let me introduce you my favourite town!

It is a place with many characteristic interesting features. It is located on the south of Bohemia with its population nine thousand. My town has a lot of historical places such as the ... gate or The plague column. But most visiting and beautiful is the square called... . With The Renessaince town hall are both (of them) a center of all activity. People come here from neighbouring villages to admire our local monuments, or just to buy some necessities _ not only clothes and food but also souvenirs. Cultural life is not so rich as in larger cities around but yes, there are some ways of spending time. If you stay here a longer time, you should go to the cinema or stop in for a cup of tea or coffe at the nearest caffé. Especially, we have really nice restaurants. You can just pick up the phone, reserve a table and have lunch or dinner at you favourite kind of restaurant . Sport stadium, library, different kinds of shops _ these and many others things, how you enjoy a good time in (virtual town).

In summary, it is a really nice place to live and there is not too much to change, but one issue I don´t like here . The prefabs _ old-fashioned and ungly buildings are wherever you look. That´s why I prefer east part of town where any "grey ugly monsters" aren´t around.