Správnost textu - časy a slovíčka

- I had always...until - predminulym casem zde naznacujes, ze bude nasladovat nejaka udalost z minulosti, ktera to zmenila. Coz je v poradku. V jinem pripade by se pouzil pouze prosty minuly.

- Pak nasleduje flashback, ktery casove predchazi tomu, co se v minulosti stalo a co je tvuj stredobod pribehu a tedy je cely odstavec v predminulem case. Pokud ale prectes par knizek, kde se podobne flashbacky vyskytuji, zjistis, ze v praxi si casto autori uvolnuji past participle prechodom do prosteho minuleho tak, aby meli past participle opet volny pro pripad, ze by chtely udelat flashback ve flashbacku. Tedy zacnou jednu dve vety pomoci past perfect a pak plynule prejdou zpet do past. Ono je to pri cteni i mene rusive, nez drzet treba i nekolik stranek v predminulem case.

- Kazdopadne flashback pokracuje az do bodu, kdy se stalo co se stalo. Tedy do te doby drzis i predminuly cas.

- Zbytek je pak uz v minulem case, pac uz je to to, o cem hovoris, ze se Ti v minulosti stalo. Vyjimkou je uvedomneni si, ze si zapomela text, protoze text si zapomela drive, nez sis to uvedomila, takze opet by mel byt v predminulem.

- konci se predpritomnym, jelikoz na konci rozvijis myslenku, ktera ma presah do pritomnosti

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I had always wanted to become a famous actress as far as my memory reaches until the day in March 2019 which I will never forget in the rest of my entire life:

Some weeks earlier I had been nominated for a Water goblin, one of lead roles in a christmas play organized by my school theatre club. I had been extremely exited by that oportunity as I had never played any similar or equally exposed role before. I had trained thoroughly, spent long hours learning my lines and done just everything to turn the oportunity into the great sucess.

Finaly, the D-day had come. All actors including myself had been standing in front of their parents, grandparents and a general audience as the play was about to start.

Then it happened. My part had came and all of a sudden I realised I had forgotten the text completely. My face turned red instantly, my body covered with cold sweat. My mouth froze open in a faint attemt to get a single world out. My mouth gave no voice, my brain gave no clue. Nothing but complete silence penetrating the theathre hall and shear emptiness in my mind becoming palpable. I felt all eyes in the hall staring at me spitefuly, waiting my reaction, increasing my humiliation every single second.

My embarrassment reached the top. I couldnt go on.

The experience was so frustrating to me that only a brief thought of undergoing it all again is so scarying to me that I have convinced myself that to become a famous actress is not my destiny.

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Nekdo muze mit trochu jiny nazor na to, co jeste patri do predminuleho casu a co uz ne. Podle mne zalezi do jiste miry na vykladu.

ach sakra...zdejsi editor maze apostrofy. Asi jich tam bude par chybet. Je potreba si je na vhodnych mistech domyslet...