Správnost anglických vět

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§Education in Czech republic
§according to the Charter of fundamental rights and freedoms, everyone has the right to education
§Members of the European Union have the same rights as citizens of the Czech Republic
§foreigners from the rest of the world can study here, if they prove to the school head permission to reside in the Czech republic
§Types of school
§studies in secondary schools is free, if you could speak Czech
§in Czech republic we have two types of universities and voš _ public, private
§public school are free, private school you must pay
§secondary school and university can enroll in day, evening, distance and combined
§Admission requirements on secondary school
§makes it possible organization Comenius
§both schools must be in the project Comenius or the project must have done
§students request reays director
§application is forwarded to the National Agency for Education of the country
§Admission requirements on secondary school
§after that the National Agency for Educationprocess the request with the Director of the visiting school
§length of study period is 3 to 10 months
§application must be submitted by the end of the calendar year
§beginning of the study is from the start of the new school year
§Admission requirements on university
§for european students:the schools must have the (bilateralni) contract
§the visiting school published selection procedure, usually in March or May
§if you win, you must write what subject do you want to study and how much money do you get from your school
§Admission requirements on university
§for american students
§the students must authenticate of educational attainment
§after that need to apply to the college
§if you want Scholarship you must know what of contract are between the schools
§and then you can study ther... welcome